I figured as a result Cade would be less evil. Okay, i honestly figured that would happen. When Dace stole a bit of Cades soul, he ended up leaving a bit of his in it’s place. Speaking of Cade, apparently towards the end, he wasn’t as evil as he was in previous books.
Axel even said that’s a mystery he needed to solve. Firstly, how was Cade able to see Axel during their first meeting? He wasn’t supposed to be able too. But honestly, Axel left so many plot holes that the author conveniently forgot to fix. Okay, i get that Axel wants to be with Lita and he chooses to become human.
You don’t have to keep repeating how much Cade is the opposite, we’re not going to forget they’re different people in twenty pages when you go to describe it again. Yes, you don’t have to describe how bright Dace’s soul is, once is enough. Another thing that bothered me, descriptive wise, it could get very repetitive. I would rather understand what they looked like, as opposed to what a damn tree looks like. When we got to the actual parts that should be described, the monsters Cade was creating, there was none. I mean, she would describe that tree as if no one had ever seen a tree before. Why now does she want to embrace her new life and stay with her grandmother? I also found that in some parts (the unimportant bits) the author was very descriptive. It’s not big thing, I’m just the kind of person who wants to know why she came to that conclusion. After that, we find out she no longer wants to leave her destiny. Next part is a few days ahead and we find out her grandmothers friend found her, and she is already on the mend. Example: Part 1 ends with Diare wanting to leave her destiny and her grandmother behind her. Sometimes the parts would pick up a few days later after the last section. One thing that bugged me was that when the book would part into a new section, it didn’t pick up where it left off. It could have been much better, but likewise, I’ve read much worse. As far as the actual book goes, i liked it.
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